2nd blog review

blog:http://www.kikokumi-lurvesx3.blogspot.com//

I feel that the writer's blog's layout and design is wonderful as the blog skin is very appealing. Moreover, it is easy to locate all the important elements as the blog can be navigated easily. Unfortunately, there is not much graphics on the blog, hence, making it not that interesting. The writer tries to make the content interesting as possible to the readers. There are not that many grammar errors aside from the misuse of broken english and vulgarities. Her stories are somewhat related to the topic to give a sense of understandment to her readers. Her sentences are fragmented and her paragraphing is not that good. She does not use a very wide variety of vocabulary either. Her sentence structures when read aloud, may not be understood by non-Singaporeans as alot of Singlish is present. Lastly, she does not make that much spelling and grammar mistakes.


PRESENTATION & LAYOUT— 4
THEME— 3
DESIGNS AND GRAPHICS— 2
INTEREST + TEAMWORK—2
FOCUS—2
SENTENCE AND PARAGRAPH—31
LANGUAGE & VOCABULARY+SENTENCE FLUENCY+SPELLING & GRAMMAR—2


Stacey