blog review for english

blog: http://valariee.blogspot.com/
I feel that the blog has a very nice and attractive skin that is both meaningful and adorable. The graphics are somewhat related to the skin’s theme and it is of good quality. The writer has included a comment box, music player to beautify her blog. She also has pictures to illustrate her posts and give the reader’s a sense of understanding through being able to see what happened. There are not much spelling errors aside from the frequent informal words like the addition of unnecessary letters, misspelled words, abbreviations, etc. Her entire story is related to her title to allow her readers to understand and connect. Her sentences are mostly complete and the paragraphing is just fine. Her language is excellent. However, her choice of vocabulary is not all that great. Most of her sentences sound perfectly normal and easy-on-the-ear when read out. The writer also makes very few grammar mistakes but several spelling errors could be seen.
PRESENTATION & LAYOUT— 4
THEME— 3
DESIGNS AND GRAPHICS— 3
INTEREST + TEAMWORK—4
FOCUS—3
SENTENCE AND PARAGRAPH—3
LANGUAGE & VOCABULARY+SENTENCE FLUENCY+SPELLING & GRAMMAR—2

ehh..is this how you do the review? meh.

STACEY♥